Oembboe's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wall of Concrete]

your animation is okay

but this is a case where you need to spend more time with the cartoon and make a fleshed out story or have some point to watch the flash.

riotpopper responds:

ok.us i actually do have a story thought out for this, but i made this as a test and uploaded it to get feedback.us im so new to flash its not even funny.

[Anime Dance]

Catchy

But not very interesting. The animation and art is okay and the music is nice, but other than that, this animation is just... really hard to comment on.

[CSI: Minecraft]

Great animation and idea!

The only thing I wish is that you took it a little bit further. I loved the animation and I was disappointed when it ended so abruptly.

[Butts & Dogs: Episode II]

In addition to

My girlfriend like this game its best on atari 260

[Bort & Clive "Trash"]

Brilliant!

Great animation, funny idea, and GREAT voice acting. I enjoyed it thoroughly :)

[Dog Food Animation India]

Great animation!

I enjoyed the animation and thought it was quite cute. I would have rated a Five, but I had to knock off one point for the lack of audio.

Next time, use sound effects :)

[Random flash #2]

The animation is okay

but the drawing could use some work. The flash could also use some story. I know that wasn't the point of it, but the flash wasn't really funny.

I also steeply down-voted because of the music. It didn't really feel like it belonged in the flash and frankly, that song was made in a past decade and it is better left in that past decade :P

Animate something with voices, a story with a clear-cut beginning, middle, and end. Put more effort into the drawings too.

LiamFoleyLogan responds:

Thx 4 ur advice. I made this animation when i was 13 (two years ago) and only uploaded it yesterday

[RvB Brawl]

Nice animation

but you need to utilize those skills for something more original. It's too short and there's no premise. Why is blue guy fighting red guy and why should I care?

Develop some background and use some more distinct graphics next time.

tomtyke responds:

The point behind this one was nonexistent, and that was the idea, I created this in my spare time for no reason other than I wanted to

[Titties]

I loved it

the guy who did the art for it is fantastic. so is the music

[Weather ya like it or not]

Good animation

As mentioned before, not much story, but great artwork and animation. Nice sound effects, too.