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Recent Movie Reviews

12 Movie Reviews

your animation is okay

but this is a case where you need to spend more time with the cartoon and make a fleshed out story or have some point to watch the flash.

riotpopper responds:

ok.us i actually do have a story thought out for this, but i made this as a test and uploaded it to get feedback.us im so new to flash its not even funny.

Good Concept

but poor execution. The audio was not very good. The background music loops. the voices weren't either the audio seemed crackled and distorted. The drawing seemed rushed and marginal and the animation was almost non-existent.

This story has some real potential, but you just need to work on bettering your animation, drawing, writing and audio mixing skills.

Catchy

But not very interesting. The animation and art is okay and the music is nice, but other than that, this animation is just... really hard to comment on.

Recent Game Reviews

6 Game Reviews

Bad

This game has a boring premise. A biology quiz? Not feeling it. Plus, it doesn't work right. I typed in all four letters and all of them came back as incorrect.

I think this game is broken.

luciper2007 responds:

Okay, I got you.. I'll make it well next time, thanks for your comment dude.

Hahahaha

I laughed my ass off at this game. The drawing is okay, the audio is present, and the premise is funny. It's a shame there really isn't any strategy or replay value :P

Good Job!

To beat each level of this game requires time, caution, and patience. I like that. It's a unique concept and is pretty fun to play. There were only a couple of issues I had with the game and those were:
- Lack of sound
- Whenever your ball goes off-screen, you die instantly and have to start the whole stage all over again. I know there are no other penalties, but that is just unforgiving and frustrating. It would be helpful to have an extra life or two.

Other than that, I couldn't think of any other problems I had with the game. Good job!

rigondo responds:

Thank you for this review, Oembboe. Your advice regarding extra life is brilliant, I have implemented it instantly and now it is not "unforgiving and frustrating" anymore! :) I have uploaded fixed version, you can give it a try.

Recent Audio Reviews

18 Audio Reviews

Amazing composition

I really, really, really, really liked this song. It has a strong melody and a soothing feel to it. Sadly, though, I had to knock off two points because the production wasn't quite up to snuff with the song itself. The kick drums were okay, but the snare was not near strong enough. You need to work on the mix of this song.

Other than that, it was pretty much perfect and I wouldn't change a thing.

Zephyralos responds:

Alright then! I will definitely work on that!

Thank you very much for your review -- constructive criticism is always great!

Very nice!

The only thing I really could suggest is that you make a longer version with an intro and an outro and take this concept a bit further. I found this song to be very nice and soothing, but I was disappointed with how short it was.

Awesome!

I didn't think it was possible, but you took one of my FAVORITE songs and made it even -BETTER-. Everything sounds amazing, from the FM Synths to the drums. I am also happy to hear that you used MadTracker.

TRACKERS FOREVER!

Took a break from composing to re-learn music theory and stuff. Will update when I master that stuff ;3

Andrew @Oembboe

Age 35, Male

Websmith

Someplace Midwestern

Joined on 1/23/09

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