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your animation is okay

but this is a case where you need to spend more time with the cartoon and make a fleshed out story or have some point to watch the flash.

riotpopper responds:

ok.us i actually do have a story thought out for this, but i made this as a test and uploaded it to get feedback.us im so new to flash its not even funny.

The animation is okay

but the drawing could use some work. The flash could also use some story. I know that wasn't the point of it, but the flash wasn't really funny.

I also steeply down-voted because of the music. It didn't really feel like it belonged in the flash and frankly, that song was made in a past decade and it is better left in that past decade :P

Animate something with voices, a story with a clear-cut beginning, middle, and end. Put more effort into the drawings too.

LiamFoleyLogan responds:

Thx 4 ur advice. I made this animation when i was 13 (two years ago) and only uploaded it yesterday

Nice animation

but you need to utilize those skills for something more original. It's too short and there's no premise. Why is blue guy fighting red guy and why should I care?

Develop some background and use some more distinct graphics next time.

tomtyke responds:

The point behind this one was nonexistent, and that was the idea, I created this in my spare time for no reason other than I wanted to

Took a break from composing to re-learn music theory and stuff. Will update when I master that stuff ;3

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