Oembboe's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wall of Concrete]

your animation is okay

but this is a case where you need to spend more time with the cartoon and make a fleshed out story or have some point to watch the flash.

riotpopper responds:

ok.us i actually do have a story thought out for this, but i made this as a test and uploaded it to get feedback.us im so new to flash its not even funny.

[Random flash #2]

The animation is okay

but the drawing could use some work. The flash could also use some story. I know that wasn't the point of it, but the flash wasn't really funny.

I also steeply down-voted because of the music. It didn't really feel like it belonged in the flash and frankly, that song was made in a past decade and it is better left in that past decade :P

Animate something with voices, a story with a clear-cut beginning, middle, and end. Put more effort into the drawings too.

LiamFoleyLogan responds:

Thx 4 ur advice. I made this animation when i was 13 (two years ago) and only uploaded it yesterday